She lay there, mulling over something...
Probably about the one she not just loved,
but adored more than anyone, anything...
She's frozen with his thoughts,
Time stands still, as she lay there, lost...
Oh come thou man of her dreams,
Her heart to thou screams!
Her mind and soul with your thoughts stir,
Come, and complete her!!
6 comments:
surreal, subtle, sweet
Ur speaking ur mind out.... real good 1...... :)
yaar this drawing is too good!!!
superb drawing... and kya likha hai yar... superamazing
nice, n drawing ke mood main hai :)
beautiful...especially the last couplet. but one is always complete...complete without someone...complete with someone...
heyyy matkuuuu nice sketch :D :D :::D ::D :D: :D :D ... mast banaya hai ekdum :) :P ... and the lines are good too :D .. keep writing chote hathi :D
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