chhota sa pyaara sa...
ek sapna jab woh toot gya,
firta tha haara haara sa...
na sudh rahi na budh rahi,
na sapno ki umang rahi...
ek sapna jab woh toot gya,
jaise saara jahaan chhoot gya...
na chandaa ki chandni gaati,
na dhalte sooraj ki sheetalta bhaati...
ek sapna jab woh toot gya,
jaise apna sa koi rooth gya...
ek sapna tha woh bechara sa,
anjana sa begaana sa...
ek sapna jab woh toot gya,
jaise sooraj hamesha k liye doob gya...
bade laad se usse pala tha,
sanjoya tha nikhara tha...
ek sapna jab woh toot gya,
jeene ka matlab hi chhoot gya...
14 comments:
u write really well...!
ummm... wow missy poet.. duna grt job havnt u... :) touching.. but jus a dream shud never be enuff to break u up.. ohk... :)
Achchhi hai bahut... lekin kaunsa sapna toota???
touching...
ek sapna jab woh toot gya,
jeene ka matlab hi chhoot gya...
arrey ye kya likh diya tune bas kuch ho gaya hai!!!! mast likha hai yaar.... tu bollywood me try maar le!!!
waah yaar tille waah...
lekin isse sad note pe kyun khatam kar diya yaar??
"ek sapna fir se aya hai..
nayi dishaein laya hai.
apno ka khud pe saaya hai.
ek sapna naya humne paya hai..."
@Shibani: Thanks a lot girl, thanks for appreciating
@Arushi: i agree darling, altough the poet is broken up, not me .. he he.. u know how i am
@Ninni: Thanks Nin.. ek kaafi abstract sa sapna tha, jo clearly define nahi kar sakta kabhi
@Rohit: Thanks dear for appreciating
@Anil: hehehehe.. thanks be, tere jaise jigri dost hi mujhe iss kaabil samajh sakte hain
@Nishant:wow pishutious, simply wow.. tumne meri poem ko jaan de di :)
heheheeheh...
Tilleeeeeeeee
tumne mere comment ko jaan de di!
wonderful poem!
reached here through the link on facebook given by nishant bhaiya...
ha ha.. nishant bhaiya.. main koi rickshaw chalata hun?? :-P
on a serious note, thanks shruti, for visiting it :)
hey...u wrt rlly well..nc poem...
n nice pic as well
oye kaun sa sapna toota?????mujhe nahi bataya????dekhi teri dosti dekha tera pyar bich mein aa gayi sapne ki deewar..:-(:-(
beautiful........
oye mote ... a tooooooooooooo good poem .. :) likha kar na thoda aur ... itni saari toh likhi hui hai tune ;) .. hehe .. next time woh waali likhiyo .. :) hehe
Khush raho chote :)
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